Peer Revision and Editing Checklist

Posted on November 11th, 2011 in Uncategorized by Brittney
  1. Did I write the paper so you could read it smoothly?
  2. Are my sentences too choppy?
  3. Do the topics jump around too much?
  4. Anything repetitive? Are the sentences annoyingly the same?
  5. Does the dialogue make sense?

 

  1.  Grammer
  2. Spelling
  3. Saying the same word too much
  4. Sentence structure
  5. Word choice

Revision of Memoir

Posted on November 9th, 2011 in Uncategorized by Brittney

I noticed that I use cantractions too much in my paragraphs. I will use more specific words in replace of those from now on. also I have some RIP words that i will soon replace. Also I need to finish my memoir then somehow shorten it because it is too long. I also use “I” too much at the beginning of sentences.